Saturday, September 19, 2009

My BYU entrance essay--rough draft

A university education is extremely important. Without attaining it, one limits their opportunities in life. A well educated person has many options open to them. By being well educated we can also better serve our community.

Brigham Young University is a unique institution. Not only does the school provide for mental growth but also for spiritual growth. One can increase their knowledge of the gospel while increasing their knowledge of the world around them without conflict.

Brigham Young University offers a clean uplifting environment.

I will be able to fulfill educational goals among others with the same high standards and spiritual goals.

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